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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It seems that physical
interaction
 is replaced by social
media
 in the majority of society. In my opinion,
although
 there are some drawbacks of the
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,
thís
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this
 change can bring more benefits to human life. As regards the disadvantage, social
media
 could harm the bonds of
people
 with their relationships in reality. On account of the
convenience
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 as chatting and talking can be done anywhere at any time,
people
 do not want to have physical
interaction
 anymore.
For instance
, during the COVID-19 pandemic, most
of
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the
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business
meeting
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meetings
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, teaching or talking with friends and family was performed in the online world, without any face-to-face
interaction
.
On the other hand
, social
media
 usage has more advantages
to
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 humanity.
First,
people
 can easily stay in touch with their friends and other relationships,
thus
 the links between them are stronger. As social
media
 breaks
the
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physical barriers, everyone can communicate from day to night compared to just a limited time when meeting others in the real world.
Furthermore
, talking via social
media
 can improve
people
’s confidence in that communication. When it comes to face-to-face talking,
people
 can get anxious and worried when the opponent is staring at them or in a
pressure
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 atmosphere.
This
 is particularly true when someone meets their bosses or in a serious meeting.
Hence
,
although
 the change has a drawback for
the
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society, It seems that
advantages
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 are outweighed. In conclusion, despite having a disadvantage, I believe that the replacement makes our relationships become better as the convenience and emotion boosting.
Therefore
, face-to-face
interaction
 is a basic requirement, we should use social
media
 in the most efficient way.
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