Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At the present time, a few

people

say that our population may have some challenges without

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 on each other,

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whereas

other individuals believe that

people

are getting far

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. In my opinion, living with

people

like

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one body can be a good lifestyle for us to improve our civilization. For most, living independently is

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a more preferable way of life.

Although

it

create

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the

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some problems like not having

an

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extra support from their close friends or relatives when he or she

in

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a bad situation, they are finding some useful sides of being

a self-governing humans

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a self-governing human

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until their current ages.

For example

,  numerous teenagers are doing

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everything independently even

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important

descions

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decisions

without asking their parents about them. And,

this

can be

a

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adequate development for those who are independently thinking about their important issues.

However

, I believe that having

an

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unity among

people

can be

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beneficial to maintain the development of countries. If someone

separated

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from a team,

this

person can do nothing, but with a team everything

not

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seem

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impossible for

this

person because

of

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lots of

supports

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and arguments

can

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make a good conclusion duration of working on a project.

Thus

, if we have a sense of unity among us, it may provide

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some

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opportunities to work under lots

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supports

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in every matter.

For instance

, the Japanese

people

have some respect and always support, and most importantly they always understand when they need help

to

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each other,

therefore

this

country’s

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has developed

as a result

of having unity.

To conclude

,

although

there are some advantages of being

a

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independent person

such

as making

descions

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decisions

independently,

but

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I feel that having a warm relationship with every

people

makes

the

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better environment and helps to improve

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our

economic

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.