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Nuclear power offers clean , cheap energy. The benefits if nuclear technology far outweigh the drawbavks. Do you agree or disagree? give reason for your answer.

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Nuclear
energy
 has accessed many countries in
this
 era because it is one of the reliable
energy
 sources.
However
, building the place of it
very
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 costly. I completely agree that the advantages are more than the disadvantages
to
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 nuclear
power
.
This
 essay will discuss the both pros and cons of
this
 trend Nuclear
enenrgy
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energy
 has many advantages
such
 as carbon-free electricity.
For example
,
the
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fassile
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fossil
fissile
 fuel generation sources pump massive amounts of carbon
dioxed
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dioxide
as a result
 it is the
primery
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primary
causes
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 of
the
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climate
changes
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, nuclear
power
do
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 not produce carbon
dioxied
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dioxide
 or any air pollution.
Additionally
,
nuclea
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nuclear
power
building
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buildings
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 require
small
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 land footprint. Compared with other common
energy
 facilities, nuclear
power
palnts
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plants
 take up far
lees
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less
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 physical place.
On the other hand
,
bulding
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building
nuclear
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 place is
very
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 high upfront cost because nuclear reactors are complex
divices
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devices
 that
requier
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require
requires
 many levels of
safte
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safe
safety
 built around them which make nuclear plants costly.
Moreover
, nuclear waste can be catastrophic for the
environments
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environment
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 and health. In
conclusion
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i
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 believe that
it
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is nuclear plant is worth to built and countries
are rely
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of
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on
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this
 kind of
energy
.
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