The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram provided describes the

process

of

sugar

production and formation from

sugar

cane

. The

process

given is man-made. The starting point is the harvesting of

sugar

cane

after the

end

of the growth stage

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takes about 12 to 18 months and the ending point is

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usually the drying and cooling stage of

sugar

. The

end

product is

sugar

.

Overall

, after analyzing the above stages, it can be seen that the formation

process

of

sugar

from the raw material

sugar

cane

entails many steps

such

as harvesting, crushing, purifying, evaporating, centrifuging, and

finally

drying and cooling. It is a repeated

process

. The

end

product is dried and cool

sugar

crystals. The starting point is harvesting the mature and grown

sugar

cane

by farmers. It is interesting to note that the growth phase’s duration is around 18 months. After the

end

of

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stages comes the crushing

process

where farmers put the

sugar

canes inside a machine where it grinds the canes into liquid juice.

This

leads to the final four stages of the

process

which are purification, evaporation, centrifuge and drying and cooling. In the purifying step,

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juice of

sugar

cane

is purified with a Limestone filter to extract the filtrate.

Then

, the evaporator uses heat to transform the purified juice into syrup.

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steps,

sugar

crystals are separated by centrifuge, dried and cooled in a huge container.