Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more material and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal.

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Most people have argued that the objective of each public is manufacturing more
resources
and commodities. I completely agree with
this
statement as the major result would be increased job opportunities for its citizens
as well as
the
overall
development of the community's infrastructure.
Firstly
, Nations that rely solely on manufactured
products
develop fastest compared to those that import
products
from other nations.
This
is because
resources
and commodities are readily available to its citizens.
Therefore
, through the employment opportunities created, many citizens are able to sustain themselves without struggling.
For instance
, I used to work at a local maize meal company where I could package maize flour ready for consumption and
then
use the money I earned to buy myself college stationeries.
As a result
of
this
, my college expenses were reduced.
Secondly
, Through the
nation
processing its own
resources
and commodities in large quantities, the economy improves as well.The extra
products
are sold and
thus
exported to other countries earning the
nation
foreign currency.
For example
, exported tea has earned my
nation
a good reputation
due to
its unique taste.Because of
this
, the objective to produce and export more
resources
overseas contribute greatly to the development of the
nation
. In conclusion, employment opportunities created
as well as
capital earned from the export of a
nation
's manufactured
products
contribute highly to its development ,especially its infrastructure.
Therefore
, it is crucial for every state to produce
it
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its
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own raw materials and goods.
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