Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reasons? Do advantages of their development outweigh it's disadvantages

Nowadays, teenagers and

youngest

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are leaving their homes in

countryside

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the countryside

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and seeking study and work in big

cities

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.

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,

this

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phenomena

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is existing

from

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for

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along

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a long

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time, we did not consider the reasons behind

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, even though the disadvantages of

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matter outweigh

advantages

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the advantages

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I will clarify the motivations behind

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issue and the reflected downsides.

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with, the reasons why people are leaving rural areas and

go

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to big

cities

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either

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for getting a job or for enrolling in universities.

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, there is a high rate of unemployment in small

cities

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,

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moreover

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the level of salaries is relatively less than

big

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cities

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, and

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of

this

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more and more

graduates

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set the first goal to them is getting an opportunity out of their places.

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in Egypt, most countryside areas are empty

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fresh

graduates

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, because they all are in Cairo, the capital for chasing their dreams of having

better

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a better

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job

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jobs

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and better

live

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.

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,

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the government tries to enhance services there, they always prefer to leave their hometowns.

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, the disadvantages of

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phenomena

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are obvious.

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, there will be traffic jams and crowded places everywhere,

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high level of pollution,

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secondly

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there will be

a

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apply

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competition between job-seekers even if the people from

countryside

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the countryside

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are willing to work for little salaries, it will make the employers prefer to hire them and

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of

this

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more unemployment between

cities

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residents.

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, in

Cairo

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,Cairo

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many fresh

graduates

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are struggling to get a good job because of the competition with other

graduates

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who agree to work with

low

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a low

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range of salaries. In conclusion,

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trend needs some research to clarify the reasons

behind

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, and

to

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apply

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count the consequences and

to

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apply

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solve it