The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the changes in the percentage of people who were born in
Australia
and who weren't born in Australia
and living in urban, rural and town
from 1995 to 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
towns
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that most of the people were born in cities
outside Australia
, while
the least were
born outside Change the verb form
was
Australia
too, but living in rural areas
.
First of all, in 1995, the percentage of children who were born in Australia
and living in cities
was 50%. People who live in town reached 20%, but almost 30% of the citizens were born in rural areas
. However
, 60% was the number of the
humans who were born outside Correct article usage
apply
Australia
living
in Wrong verb form
live
cities
. By far, 10% of the nationals live in towns and 40% live
in rural Replace the word
life
areas
.
According to
the ratio in 2010, over 60% were born in Australia
and spending
most of Wrong verb form
spent
the
time in Change the word
their
cities
. On the other hand
, the same percentage of individuals, which is 15%, live in town and rural areas
inside
Change preposition
in
Australia
. Significantly, 80% of the nationals, which was the highest record, live in cities
outside Australia
. After that, citizens who live in towns and rural areas
reached 10% and 5%, respectively.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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