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Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Write at least 250 words.

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In our up-to-date life, the majority of individuals strongly believe that the growth in international
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 has an advantage side on
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nature and ought to prohibit. From my point of view, the raise in international travel has a detrimental impact on the
environment
 and In
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 points and I will investigate both
of
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views. On the one hand, these days' people visit some type of places, they hurt the
environment
 to leave their trash everywhere
instead
 of trashbin.
As a result
, it seriously
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to
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our nature and that's why some
countrie's
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countries
government
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 mention that
,
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 they should be banned to come traveller to their nation.
In addition
 to that, a
lot
 of
visitors
 do not apply the rule of the
environment
 and they continue smoking and
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due to
the
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air pollution.
On the other hand
, a
lot
 of individuals guess that
,
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 some people do not cause
to
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the
environment
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 problem, that's why they agree that,
visitors
 do not
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 to visit their country because,
this
 way may be beneficial to their financial budget
,
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 because when a
lot
 of
visitors
 travel to their country, they spend a
lot
 of money and it is
good
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 way to earn money.
In addition
 to that, visiting a
lot
 of travellers help to increase every
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 fame, because when
nation
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the nation
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 is getting famous,
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 population increase and
besides
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as a result
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the costs
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costs
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 of living is getting pretty low. In
final
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 analysis, many types of travellers
due to
 air pollution and hurt the
environment
 by do not apply the rule of environmental issues. That's why, from my point of view, nowadays international travel has a negative impact on nature, that's why
,
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 every nation ought to prohibit to come
visitors
.
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