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Some people believe that media and news affecting our life in positive way while others disagree ? What is your opinion?

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While
 some people believe programs are affected our lives in a positive way.
On the contrary
, others don't. There is no doubt that
media
 and
news
 have pros and cons. In my opinion, I agree with both views.
To begin
 with positive affecting of
media
.
Media
 give us a picture of what's happening in the world and awareness of new things coming up or changes.
However
,
this
 will affect our lives and minds if they were positive stuff. Especially if people need to know about that stuff.
Media
 and
news
 could be negative affection it was useless.
Media
 and
news
 could publish and share a lot of things that are not necessary to be known. People may be affected in a negative way and be unhappy if
this
 stuff was sad,
Also
 it might be a waste of time. I believe sometimes we have to be aware and know of everything that happens to the world when needed. But most of the time
media
 and
news
 shares insignificant materials. Throughout, we need it in rapid and rush life. In conclusion, it would be useful to look at
media
 and
news
 once in a
while
. ,
Also
 it could come back with reverse results if it was negative. But we still need it.
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