In most countries, online
payment
through cellphone apps is becoming increasingly common.
While
this
trend may have some disadvantages, I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
On the
one
hand, there are some disadvantages of online
payment
using
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.
Firstly
,
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Internet is
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to be stable for
this
kind of
payment
. It
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a detrimental problem to individuals
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if
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is unreliable and not working properly.
Consequently
,
people
may lose their
payment
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and need to contact the founder of
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or bank.
Additionally
, there are risk of leaking
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personal details and bank details through
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, if
people
are used
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without checking
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or fraud
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one
.
For instance
, in today's era, a number of fake applications
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available
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mobile phone for
payment
.
People
leak their private details on
such
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and lose their money.
However
, despite these drawbacks, I believe that there are more advantages
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this
online
payment
trend.
One
of the biggest benefits is that
people
can pay
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types of things using
one
application
.
For example
, they can pay electric bills, gas bills and
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that.
Furthermore
,
this
kind of
payment
is easy to understand for all ages of
people
.
For example
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older communities
also
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while
they are buying vegetables. Another obvious
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is that
people
can purchase things without carrying money and cards.
As a result
,
people
cannot worry about money being stolen.
In conclusion,
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may have some cons in terms of security and the need
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stable Internet, I believe that the advantages are more significant.