In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV Shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV dramas?

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on
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reading or watching
crime related
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stuff. The popularity behind these increased
from
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last
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couple of years.
This
essay will examine different reasons why these novels and TV shows become popular and
also
give my opinion regarding these
matter
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matters
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. One of the reasons, why individuals
show
interest to watch
crime
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a crime
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show
is
story
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the story
a story
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behind it. The
show
’s story is replicate the human being’s
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.
Moreover
, the
crime
scenes of
show
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are realistic.
Additionally
, children are more sensitive towards
to see
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seeing
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the visuals rather than reading the
books
. Another reason, why TV
crime
shows becoming popular is because
of
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one’s life is
attaching
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attached
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to that
show
’s story and they want to learn something from them.
Moreover
,
People
, who are fond of reading
books
, are showing more interest in
the
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crime
fiction
books
rather that any
another
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other
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sort of
the
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books
. In my opinion,
this
phenomenon has
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number of merits and demerits. In today’s era women’s safety
is really become
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a question. One of the advantages is women can learn from it and
also
learn how to protect
herself
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themselves
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from
this
crime
.
Secondly
, the local community is aware of
this
crime
and
protect
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their society from these dangerous
people
.
Although
it has advantages,
crime
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the crime
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TV
show
has
number
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of dangerous disadvantages. One of them is it
encourage
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encourages
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people
to do some bad work. Another problem is at age of learning subjects; children can learn
crime
stuff which could be harmful
for
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to
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their family or society.
To conclude
,
from
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in
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last
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the last
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couple of years, all ages of
people
are watching or reading
Crime
related stuff during their free time and it becomes popular day by day. I believe, it is important for
people
who really needed and
need
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to implement
in
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their life. But
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side, it is really dangerous for adults. The parents should take serious steps and understand the sense of responsibility.
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  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
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