The graph shows the number of students enrolled in 4 different courses in China from 2008 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information.

The graph shows the number of students enrolled in 4 different courses in China from 2008 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information.
The line graph provides information on the dynamics of four courses taken in China over a period of four years.
Overall
, the number of course-takers does not witness a dramatic increase,
although
the opposite was true in the case of undergraduates. It is evident that
whereas
the proportion of those attending undergraduate institutions and online
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a marked increase, the others saw a corresponding stagnation.
According to
the information, the most significant increase has been witnessed in the category of undergraduates, rising from just under 20 million in 2008 to approximately 23 million people by 2012.
Similarly
, the percentage of those taking online training relatively grew over the same period,
however
not significantly.
In addition
,
whereas
the two courses mentioned above went up, the number of postgraduates shows a stable line in the following four years, contrary to literacy course-takers, who saw a downward trend by 2010 with an amount of zero, following a slight resurge by 2012.
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  • enrollment
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • significant
  • moderate
  • dramatic
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady
  • sharp
  • notable
  • data
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