You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luaggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage untill the last day of your holiday. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: 1. complain about the situation. 2. Say why it caused you problem. 3. seek suitable compensation.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding my baggage lost at the Istanbul airport on the 25th of February, 2023. The airline delivers to my home in bad condition after the trip and will request you to provide money worth the loss. I landed early in the morning at the airport. My luggage did not arrive on the conveyor belt. I did some investigation with the airport team but they could only issue a complaint about it. The whole holiday went in vain because of

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mishappening. I purchased clothes and toiletries there at a very high cost but I could not buy all the required items which I stored in the baggage so I could utilize them there. The received suitcases are in bad shape and many items have been stolen from them. So, I would like to reimburse the worth for the lost item and damaged luggage 500 US dollars. I hope you will understand the situation I went through and assist me the fulfil my compensation. Yours Faithfully, Mandeep Singh

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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