The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart provides data about the week-expenditure which was spent by families in a particular country from 1968 to 2018. Units are measured in percentage.
food which showed 35 per cent in 1986 and
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whereas
others such
as clothing and footwear, personal goods
and household goods
were less spent on in the given periods.
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in 2018 around 20% to compare the less point was seen on fuel and power with the
percentage of above 5 per cent in both represented eras.
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leisure about 10% in 1986 and more than 15% in 2018, Correct article usage
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however
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clothing and footwear, Correct article usage
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goods
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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