The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart provides data about the week-expenditure which was spent by families in a particular country from 1968 to 2018. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it clearly
be
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seen that units
such
as
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housing,
the
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transport and
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leisure were more consumed by households,
whereas
others
such
as clothing and footwear, personal
goods
and household
goods
were less spent on in the given periods. Regarding most common expense by local people in a week in that area was
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food which showed 35 per cent in 1986 and
then
in 2018 around 20% to compare the less point was seen on fuel and power with
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percentage of above 5 per cent in both represented eras. Families spent more on
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housing,
the
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transport and
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leisure about 10% in 1986 and more than 15% in 2018,
however
, they convened for
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clothing and footwear,
the
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personal
goods
and
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household
goods
approximately 8%
for
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week
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in both 1968 and
in
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2018 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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