The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.

The flowchart depicts all the necessary steps for drinking

water

in Australia. Those processes will be divided into two main steps: producing filtering

water

and drinking

water

. The whole production

is

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started

with

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collecting rainwater from every Australian household in the drain.

Initially

, before

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being filtered

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filtered

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filtering

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,

water

needs to be delivered by

drain

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which is located in the ceiling and soil. Filtration is one of the crucial actions to filter any contamination. After

filtered

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,

water

gets to be stored in the storage machine to be processed

further

. In the subsequent stage,

water

should be transported by pipes and treated by

water

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treatment machine to destroy any chemical molecules in order to security and safety in society. Afterwards,

water

is delivered to every household through specific pipes. Eventually,

water

is ready to be consumed by every Australian.

This

technology helps people to improve their drinking habits and prevent any diseases

such

as diarrhoea and thymus.