With the increase in transport and accommodation problems in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Schools

are following various curriculums to improve the efficiency of

students

.

However

, to develop other artistic

skills

some people profess that

schools

should give an additional effort to teach

subjects

like arts, music, drama and creative writing. These people including me strongly agree that learning these

skills

is more beneficial for

students

' future in terms of their thinking and

confidence

.

Firstly

, these

subjects

are inducing the creative

skills

and abilities of

students

. In order to successfully achieve

this

, the adolescent stage is the best time. It is proven that children's mental abilities are more tender at

this

age and

consequently

inoculating any new

skills

inside their brain is not a meticulous task. As an added advantage, most schoolchildren are physically free other than academic hours.

Therefore

, their free time can be utilized by institutions to efficiently teach them a few

skills

like these.

For example

, many

schools

in my neighbourhood provide extra hours in the evening for teaching classical music to middle school

students

. My sister who had undergone these classes now at the age of twenty became a professional vocal musician.

This

illustrates that adding an extra skill to children will never become futile and perhaps they can enjoy the befit of one more career option.

Secondly

, a sense of

confidence

is vital for schoolchildren. Art

subjects

are not theoretical as others.

Thus

, these

subjects

guide

students

in a better way to become more confident in order to succeed in some practical classes.

For instance

, if any child supposes to participate in a drama, he/she mandatorily needs to mingle with others and speak.

This

conversation could help them to bring out their natural ability of

confidence

. One of my friends who was an introvert during school days had suffered from depression and fear of exams, but after being participated in the stage play in our anniversary celebration he really came out of his problem and even did his exams with flying colours.

This

incident has brought me to argue in favour of

this

view. In conclusion, teaching arts

subjects

in

schools

, not only is

this

important to develop the artistic

skills

of

students

, but

also

to give them a sense of

confidence

and responsibility.

Therefore

, I strongly

agree

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this

opinion.