In many societies, there is less social contact between the elderly and the young. What are the reasons and what measures can be taken?

Nowadays, there is less interaction between old
people
and young
people
. In
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essay
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I will discuss the reasons for less social contact between different generations and some solutions. On the one hand, there is no doubt that the elderly and young have a big generation gap regarding the difference in lifestyle trends. Older
people
who live in traditional culture would not like to adapt to modern society. It causes a lot of
communication
problems between them.
For example
, international food and street food are now a key part of teenage life. Sushi and bubble milk tea
are
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the most attractive for junior citizens rather than eating at home with their grandparents.
Thus
, the generation gap is a huge barrier between junior and senior citizens.
On the other hand
, youngers rely on digital products. They spend plenty of time on social media to post their daily life and
concern
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about their friend’s life. It reduces the opportunity
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face-to-face with their relatives and grandparents.
For instance
, teens spend lots of time on social platforms
such
as Facebook and Instagram. Youngers like to take a photo before they have a meal and
then
publish the picture on
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social media
platform
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.
Also
, they prefer checking the updated information
while
they are eating food.
Therefore
, it develops a distance between the generations. In conclusion, the elderly and young have a lack of
communication
. It is because of the generation gap and the use of technology. It can be solved through active
communication
such
as family events or gatherings and by encouraging older
people
to learn to use technology.
Therefore
, it helps to build up a
communication
bond between them.
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