Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Many
people
decide to work for themselves in
these days rather than Change preposition
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doing
jobs under another Wrong verb form
do
company
. This
essay discusses the reason and drawbacks of this
discussion of their career.
There are two main reasons why people
are deciding to be entrepreneurs. The main one is that
to have more profit for themselves. Correct determiner usage
apply
Also
, workers can contribute all their hard work to their own company
. Furthermore
, self-employers can work independently, and it motivates people
to break their rules and expand their own company
for their own desires. Fix the agreement mistake
companies
For instance
, Sri Lankan famous businesswoman Otara Gunawardena left her home because she wanted to start her own clothing company
. Now it became number
one clothing brand in Sri Lanka. Correct article usage
the number
Moreover
, being
self-employment makes Unnecessary verb
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people
self-satisfaction.
Further
entrepreneurs have more drawbacks by
running their own Change preposition
in
business
. The biggest drawback is the risk that they have to bear if the Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
company
runs out of the profit margin. However
, people
should invest more money at the beginning of their company
. Also
, people
who are being
self-employees are not getting Unnecessary verb
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salary
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salaries
such
as workers. Therefore
, they have to depend on them self
to earn money. Correct your spelling
themself
themselves
As
Change preposition
For
and
example, one of my friends started a small Correct your spelling
an
business
of
importing clothes from Malaysia but Change preposition
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due to
the economic condition of Sri Lanka, government
put the restrictions on imported items. Add an article
the government
Het
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Her
business
got collapse
and she became bankrupt. Wrong verb form
collapsed
According to
that, running your own business
is riskier.
In conclusion, many people
are venturing since they can have more interest for
their own and Change preposition
in
believing
that they will have a better future in their career. Wrong verb form
believe
However
, it will not suit for
everyone because of the riskiness and the stressful condition.Change preposition
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...