You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir, NOTICE OF AN ERROR CONTAINED IN AN ARTICLE IN YOUR MAGAZINE I am a regular reader of your international magazine and I must commend you for a job well done these past fifteen years of existence of the "TELL MAGAZINE". I was particularly excited when I observed that my ancestral home, Bende community was captured in your most recent publication dated 19th March 2023 but one main purpose of writing
this
letter is to correct a notion erroneously expressed.
Firstly
, I want to thank you for taking the time to carry out that research about our community and providing virtually every important message about our cultural heritage. Every news feed contained therein is absolutely correct except the line which stated that our native market is functional only on Friday evenings and must be fortnightly.
This
information is wrong. Our community market functions once a week and is always on Mondays
in contrast
to what was contained in your publication. Kindly effect
this
correction so that people who intend to visit my home town will be duly guided in case they need to plan their activities around the market days. I wish to suggest that
this
particular publication be revoked and the necessary correction made before it gets published again. Thank you in anticipation of your cooperation. Yours faithfully, Lemuel, Peniel
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incorrect information
  • misleading
  • rectify
  • significance
  • credibility
  • fact-based
  • accurate depiction
  • reliable sources
  • misinformation
  • influence public perception
  • tourist attraction
  • reputation
  • publish a correction
  • conduct research
  • consult local experts
  • accurate representation
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