You want to hold a surprise party for a friend who is visiting his home town after a long time from a foreign country. Write a letter to a common friend asking for his help in organizing the party and in your letter: Write the reasons for organizing the party Describe when, where and how you would be organizing the party Ask your friend to meet you in person for further discussions

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Dear Mike I am expressing a desire to organize get together a

party

for steve johnson . Who had just returned from Germany after five years

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It's been ages since to see him and I am very excited to meet my friend. So I decided to organise a

party

for him . he will be coming in June 2022 for 20 days . The venue needs to be finalised

along with

the menu for the

party

. I am planning to organise a

party

on June 27 2022. I am thinking of arranging

this

party

in Hotel Marriot as it has a spacious banquet hall where we can seat and enjoy a buffet lunch / dinner.

Furthermore

, I would like to discuss the

party

with you .

Therefore

can we meet and discuss

party

plans? I would like to have a get-together kind of

party

for him . please let me know when we can meet in

this

regard. looking forward to a quick reply. Cheers DENIS COHEN

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