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There is no need to attend a live performance (a play or concert) because seeing it at home on television is better. To what extend to you agree or disagree ?

#live #performance #play #concert #home #television
Watching an event on the stage is good mode
entertainment
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of entertainment
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. Even though some people think that it can be replaced by seeing videos ,
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I believe that physical presence
on
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 the event is more
worthy
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 for two major reasons. Primarily, by attending live performances we are getting attached
with
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 the atmosphere and the ambience
which
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created by the performers. To explain, the costumes and light arrangements, sound system and expression of the viewers are more sensitive in the event occasion than watching it on
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television.
Thus
 it becomes a beautiful entertainment in various modes and enjoyable in different aspects.
In contrast
, watching these
program
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programs
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 on television won't be able to create
such
 feelings
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 viewers , because all of the effects are limited.
Overall
 attending a program on the occasion will give more feelings and sensory information rather than watching it on
a
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television.
In addition
 to that, by attending programs
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 the stage , we are supporting the performers and they can be appreciated at the same
times
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time
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 .
furthermore
 the support from the people who
present
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in
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 the occasion will create more confidence and relaxation in
artist
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the artist
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,
hence
 they can perform very well .
Moreover
while
 attending these
program
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programs
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, we are getting a chance to physically watch the artist and evaluate the difference
how
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in how
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 they are on the screen and on the stage. So physical attending
on
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 the events are giving
a
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great support to the artists.
To sum up
, watching live is more beneficial than watching it on TV
,
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because it
give
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 the chance to enjoy the atmosphere and appreciate the performers. So I disagree with the statement.
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