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Nowadays the way many people intereact with each other had changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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Coming from a country where
food
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 is worshipped before having a meal at the table. I have developed great heed towards
food
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 particularly. During
my
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high school, I came across a very strong statement which goes like "The
food
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 you can be either the safest and most powerful form of medicine or the slowest form of poison".
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, my perspective of looking at
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 got entirely changed and decided to pursue
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 career in the life science field for learning and
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 to the
food
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system
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 as a whole. Evidently, I applied for a bachelor's in "
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 Science and
Food
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Technology
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"
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 our state university. My bachelor's
program
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 introduced me to the interdisciplinary subjects which need to be known to develop or maintain a sustainable
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 environment in society. My bachelor's course structure included Microbiology, Chemistry,
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 Engineering,
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Technology
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last
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 but not least was
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 Business Management which covered subjects like Economics and Financial Management. Indeed, the concept of
food
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 industries cannot be understood without having in-sight
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 of the aforementioned subjects. Apart from the theoretical
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 gained in the
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 I have tried to grasp any chance to gain practical
knowledge
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. Our degree
program
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 was integrated with 5 months plant training period which was part of our course curriculum, where I got a chance to work with Chhattisgarh State Co-operative
Dairy
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 Federation Limited whose branding name is Dev Bhog, there I was able to apply my classroom
knowledge
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 and practical experience had before and was effective in contributing positively to the work environment in the plant. During the training, I
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served the production department for a month and worked with many
food
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 technocrats there.
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, I
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 work in the Amul
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 as Center Incharge after Completion of B.Tech in
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Technology
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. There cannot be any perfect time when I learned about
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program
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 i.e.,
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System
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; it was during the final year of my
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. I soon realized that
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 master's
program
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 will be an imperative step for furthering my career in the field. Master's in
food
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technology
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 perfectly
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 my keen interest in the technical aspects of the
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 industry.
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, as our lifestyles are changing, I consider that there is a need for change in the selection of products and improvement in the manufacturing of the products because the central point of sustainable
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 systems is the product and the process involve in it.
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system
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 excites and motivates me at the same time to strive hard and make a valuable contribution
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 the world
food
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 scenario. Another component of
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program
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 that has captivated my mind is the well-welded specialization in
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, which gives the student a considerable amount of invaluable practical experience alongside theoretical
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. Here an aspirant will not only excel in his/her academic front but
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 sets to be competitive in the job market.
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,
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 master's
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 will help me to delve deeper into the intricacies of the
food
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 industries and learn thoroughly the capabilities and limitations of the current field.
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