Nowadays the way many people intereact with each other had changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Coming from a country where
food
is worshipped before having a meal at the table. I have developed great heed towards
food
particularly. During
my
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high school, I came across a very strong statement which goes like "The
food
you can be either the safest and most powerful form of medicine or the slowest form of poison".
After
this
, my perspective of looking at
food
got entirely changed and decided to pursue
my
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career in the life science field for learning and
contributing
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to the
food
system
as a whole. Evidently, I applied for a bachelor's in "
Dairy
Science and
Food
Technology
"
for
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our state university. My bachelor's
program
introduced me to the interdisciplinary subjects which need to be known to develop or maintain a sustainable
food
environment in society. My bachelor's course structure included Microbiology, Chemistry,
Food
Engineering,
Food
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Technology
last
but not least was
Dairy
Business Management which covered subjects like Economics and Financial Management. Indeed, the concept of
food
industries cannot be understood without having in-sight
knowledge
of the aforementioned subjects. Apart from the theoretical
knowledge
gained in the
classroom
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I have tried to grasp any chance to gain practical
knowledge
. Our degree
program
was integrated with 5 months plant training period which was part of our course curriculum, where I got a chance to work with Chhattisgarh State Co-operative
Dairy
Federation Limited whose branding name is Dev Bhog, there I was able to apply my classroom
knowledge
and practical experience had before and was effective in contributing positively to the work environment in the plant. During the training, I
have
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served the production department for a month and worked with many
food
technocrats there.
In addition
, I
also
work in the Amul
Dairy
as Center Incharge after Completion of B.Tech in
Dairy
Technology
. There cannot be any perfect time when I learned about
this
program
i.e.,
Food
System
; it was during the final year of my
bachelors
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. I soon realized that
this
master's
program
will be an imperative step for furthering my career in the field. Master's in
food
technology
perfectly
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my keen interest in the technical aspects of the
food
industry.
Moreover
, as our lifestyles are changing, I consider that there is a need for change in the selection of products and improvement in the manufacturing of the products because the central point of sustainable
food
systems is the product and the process involve in it.
This
is not to exaggerate, but the idea of a sustainable
food
system
excites and motivates me at the same time to strive hard and make a valuable contribution
in
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the world
food
scenario. Another component of
this
program
that has captivated my mind is the well-welded specialization in
Food
System
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, which gives the student a considerable amount of invaluable practical experience alongside theoretical
knowledge
. Here an aspirant will not only excel in his/her academic front but
also
learn sundry social and technical
skills
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sets to be competitive in the job market.
To sum up
,
this
master's
program
will help me to delve deeper into the intricacies of the
food
industries and learn thoroughly the capabilities and limitations of the current field.
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