The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph represents the statistic for foreign tourists travelling to three different places in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, we can see from the graph that the visitors to the mountains and the lakes were only a few when compared to the coast which always has seen more. Focusing on the tourists to the lake and the mountains start off with only 10
thousand
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respectively in the year 1987. Both the spots were attracting around almost 25
thousand
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guests in 1992, and, in the same year, the stats were only peaking for the lake up to around 72
thousand
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in 2002, which saw a huge downfall
at the end
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to only 50
thousand
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visitors.
In contrast
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, the mountains did not slip at any stage between the period of 30 years, but they didn't occupy more than 37
thousand
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visitors which is the highest total of tourists visited there in the year 2007.
Next,
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the most popular spot for intruders in the country throughout the span will be the coastal region. Even though it has more figure of foreigners who visited at the beginning is 40
thousand
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. It has seen a downside for the next five years, with stats going even below the lake.
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, similar to the lakes, it started to peak and had a whooping rise to the end of the period with approximately 76
thousand
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people which is the highest sum of intruders at any stage of the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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