In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
It is observed that in some cultures, parents often teach their
children
that if they Use synonyms
work
hard enough, their efforts will be paid deservedly. Use synonyms
While
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this
view has some advantages, the disadvantages are more significant.
On the one hand, encouraging Linking Words
children
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hard have a huge effect on their characteristics. Use synonyms
For example
, the academic journey is hard and long, Linking Words
students
have to put in many efforts to succeed in it. By telling offspring that hard Use synonyms
work
will be paid, many Use synonyms
students
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such
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Thus
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children
who succeed in their studies are more likely to have a wonderful Use synonyms
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in the future since they learned a lot of skills and knowledge at a young age.
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On the other hand
, many youngsters are suffered from both physical and mental issues because of their families. Linking Words
For example
, many Asian parents put too much pressure on their Linking Words
children
and often tell them to Use synonyms
work
hard. In order to achieve parents’ expectations, many adolescents stay up late to study, and attend so many extra classes. Many Use synonyms
students
in Asia are diagnosed to have diseases related to the stomachUse synonyms
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Furthermore
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students
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due to
studying too much and not enough experience in real life.
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children
by promising success Use synonyms
have
some benefits, but the negative effects outweigh them.Change the verb form
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