It is observed that in some cultures, parents often teach their 
children
 that if they Use synonyms
work
 hard enough, their efforts will be paid deservedly. Use synonyms
While
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this
 view has some advantages, the disadvantages are more significant.
On the one hand, encouraging Linking Words
children
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work
 hard have a huge effect on their characteristics. Use synonyms
For example
, the academic journey is hard and long, Linking Words
students
 have to put in many efforts to succeed in it. By telling offspring that hard Use synonyms
work
 will be paid, many Use synonyms
students
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Thus
, those Linking Words
children
 who succeed in their studies are more likely to have a wonderful Use synonyms
career
 in the future since they learned a lot of skills and knowledge at a young age.
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On the other hand
, many youngsters are suffered from both physical and mental issues because of their families. Linking Words
For example
, many Asian parents put too much pressure on their Linking Words
children
 and often tell them to Use synonyms
work
 hard. In order to achieve parents’ expectations, many adolescents stay up late to study, and attend so many extra classes. Many Use synonyms
students
 in Asia are diagnosed to have diseases related to the stomachUse synonyms
,
 and undergo anxiety, and depression. Remove the comma
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Furthermore
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students
 have lack social skills Use synonyms
due to
 studying too much and not enough experience in real life.
In conclusion, motivating Linking Words
children
 by promising  success Use synonyms
have
 some benefits, but the negative effects outweigh them.Change the verb form
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