In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is observed that in some cultures, parents often teach their

children

that if they

work

hard enough, their efforts will be paid deservedly.

While

this

view has some advantages, the disadvantages are more significant. On the one hand, encouraging

children

to

work

hard have a huge effect on their characteristics.

For example

, the academic journey is hard and long,

students

have to put in many efforts to succeed in it. By telling offspring that hard

work

will be paid, many

students

have been inspired and gained many achievements

such

as national prizes.

Thus

, those

children

who succeed in their studies are more likely to have a wonderful

career

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in the future since they learned a lot of skills and knowledge at a young age.

On the other hand

, many youngsters are suffered from both physical and mental issues because of their families.

For example

, many Asian parents put too much pressure on their

children

and often tell them to

work

hard. In order to achieve parents’ expectations, many adolescents stay up late to study, and attend so many extra classes. Many

students

in Asia are diagnosed to have diseases related to the stomach

,

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and undergo anxiety, and depression.

Furthermore

, some

students

have lack social skills

due to

studying too much and not enough experience in real life. In conclusion, motivating

children

by promising success

have

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some benefits, but the negative effects outweigh them.