The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates a small part of the Urban area which is located in Berkshire.

However

, they forecast to get development.

Overall

,The given

town

has all the necessities for individuals

such

as houses, supermarkets

as well as

parking availability.

This

town

also

serves a different

road

that is

extremely helpful for reached to the destination. The phase in

town

starts from the public park, which was currently empty. After that McGoldrick

Road

start and beside the

road

few cars are parked.

Furthermore

, very right hand on McGoldrick

road

numerous houses are situated. These all houses are getting

road

but have no way reached to the roundabout.

Moreover

, they have connections with parking areas and supermarkets etc.

On the contrary

side, the

road

reaches a different street through the roundabout. On the street, the south side supermarket is available,

Although

it is far from the living area.The

town

has

also

the availability of sports in the form of a sports centre.Admittedly the sports centre is very beneficial for people and it is

also

part of the development.

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