The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates a small part of the Urban area which is located in Berkshire.

However

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, they forecast to get development.

Overall

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,The given

town

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has all the necessities for individuals

such

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as houses, supermarkets

as well as

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parking availability.

This

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town

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also

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serves a different

road

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that is

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extremely helpful for reached to the destination. The phase in

town

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starts from the public park, which was currently empty. After that McGoldrick

Road

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start and beside the

road

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few cars are parked.

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, very right hand on McGoldrick

road

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numerous houses are situated. These all houses are getting

road

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but have no way reached to the roundabout.

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, they have connections with parking areas and supermarkets etc.

On the contrary

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side, the

road

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reaches a different street through the roundabout. On the street, the south side supermarket is available,

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it is far from the living area.The

town

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has

also

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the availability of sports in the form of a sports centre.Admittedly the sports centre is very beneficial for people and it is

also

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part of the development.

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Mar 21, 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Modern Society and Income. Discuss modern attitude to money and how they have changed over the year. Pay particular attention to how people of different professions are rewarded financially.

Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think the recent increasing cheap air travel brings benefits, while other people think it has drawbacks to the environment involves resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.