The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates a small part of the Urban area which is located in Berkshire.
However
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, they forecast to get development.
Overall
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,The given
town
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has all the necessities for individuals
such
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as houses, supermarkets
as well as
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parking availability.
This
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town
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also
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serves a different
road
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that is
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extremely helpful for reached to the destination. The phase in
town
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starts from the public park, which was currently empty. After that McGoldrick
Road
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start and beside the
road
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few cars are parked.
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, very right hand on McGoldrick
road
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numerous houses are situated. These all houses are getting
road
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but have no way reached to the roundabout.
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, they have connections with parking areas and supermarkets etc.
On the contrary
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side, the
road
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reaches a different street through the roundabout. On the street, the south side supermarket is available,
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it is far from the living area.The
town
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has
also
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the availability of sports in the form of a sports centre.Admittedly the sports centre is very beneficial for people and it is
also
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part of the development.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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