The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates a small part of the Urban area which is located in Berkshire.
However
, they forecast to get development.
Overall
,The given
town
has all the necessities for individuals
such
as houses, supermarkets
as well as
parking availability.
This
town
also
serves a different
road
that is
extremely helpful for reached to the destination. The phase in
town
starts from the public park, which was currently empty. After that McGoldrick
Road
start and beside the
road
few cars are parked.
Furthermore
, very right hand on McGoldrick
road
numerous houses are situated. These all houses are getting
road
but have no way reached to the roundabout.
Moreover
, they have connections with parking areas and supermarkets etc.
On the contrary
side, the
road
reaches a different street through the roundabout. On the street, the south side supermarket is available,
Although
it is far from the living area.The
town
has
also
the availability of sports in the form of a sports centre.Admittedly the sports centre is very beneficial for people and it is
also
part of the development.
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