Nowadays more and more people read news on the Internet. Nevertheless, newspapers will remain an important source of news and information for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt these days that
news
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is important for the
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wellbeing
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device or a
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standard
newspaper? In
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the positive side, classic
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better for old people who did not really follow the latest trends,
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nowadays we see the
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majority
of old folks being more comfortable with reading from a paper.
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it can be good to read from a solid object. Many researchers concluded that reading from a still paper can be great for you.
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, Reading
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online is far
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easier
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cheaper
.
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is free.
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going to
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your
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a sheet of paper.
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basically
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advantages and disadvantages. But I see that reading your
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from
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the internet is better. There are many websites now that can send you daily
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for free.
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ranging from economics to tv shows.
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