In the past, important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museums.Nowadays information is freely available on the internet, so there is no longer a need for musems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the making of

Pu-erh

Raw

Tea

and Ripe

Tea

in various stages

such

as Pan Frying, Drying under the sun, Loose Raw Te,

Pu-erh

Raw

Tea

, Loose Ripe

Tea

, Vintage

Pu-erh

Raw

Tea

and

Pu-erh

Ripe

tea

.

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,

the

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pan frying

are

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played a major role in Pu-era

Tea

making.

However

,

eventually

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it is divided into two different

tea

materials

such

as Pu-er Ripe

tea

and Vintage

Pu-erh

Raw

tea

. At the first glance, it can be clearly seen that the pan frying is

the

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position,it is

fried

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the

tea

leaves for a

while

.After that,it is rolled and dried under the sunlight for some time.

Then

, which would split in two different ways

such

as loose Raw

Tea

and

Pu-erh

Raw

Tea

.

Moreover

, the Loose Raw

Tea

is changed to Ripe

tea

.

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,

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Pu-era Raw

Tea

is stored in

a

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one place after that it is altered to Vintage Pu-era Raw

Tea

.In the

last

process,the loose ripe

tea

compressed

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to

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Pu-erh

Ripe

tea

.The process of making raw

tea

involves only a single step as compared to ripe

tea

, which involves three steps.