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You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face - What should be done

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter on behalf of Best Royal Group to complain about
services
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 you provided for our conference organized at
Shereton
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Sheraton
 Hotel on 18 March 2023. The main purpose of
this
 conference was to introduce our new products which
was
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 expected to be launched
at the end
 of
this
 month. Guests attending
this
 event included our partners and potential clients,
therefore
, we required the meeting must be organized
professional
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 and carefully. Before the event, your staff made a basic mistake which was unacceptable. At that time, there was another meeting organized
at
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on
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 the same floor
with
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 mine. To make sure that our guests could come to the right meeting, I requested your team to design a direction board and place it at the hotel entrance.
However
, your employee created a wrong direction which made a third of our guests miss the event.
This
 mistake affected a lot on our reputation and profession,
therefore
 I would like you to have appropriate action and refund some amount of
service
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 fee. Sincerely, Lana
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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