Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

Humans have become a prime culprit for the destruction of the
wildlife
population around the
world
. It is believed that humanity is the most powerful species on
this
planet and
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therefore
chosen to utilize all of nature's resources for
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own good, even
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results in the destruction of the
environment
around them. Clearly,
this
is not a positive result of human existence and many people consider that the
world
's
wildlife
population should be better protected.
To begin
, one possible way to protect
wildlife
around the
world
is to reduce the
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of polluted substances produced
through
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the human way of life. There is no denying that, it has become habitual for people to pollute water by adding chemicals to it during
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process
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or to pollute
air
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as
result
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of the fossil fuel industries and car emissions.
In addition
, stopping the addition of chemicals to water and creating cleaner processes would reduce water pollution and help to create a safer
environment
for
wildlife
to live in. Increasing the availability and use of public transportation and increasing the utility of renewable energy sources could reduce
world
pollution
further
.
On the other hand
, another possible attempt to preserve
wildlife
around
world
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is to actively promote recycling projects to reduce the
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of resources that are wasted.
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so,
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would lessen the
degredation
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degradation
of the natural
environment
, as humans continue to search for new resources.
Furthermore
, society utilizes a lot of paper and wood on a daily basis and people do not think about whether or not they are wasting these
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. Printing double-sided or on recycled paper
for example
would appear
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to nothing, yet if carried out regularly would help make a difference. In conclusion, there are numerous different ways in which every human being can help to preserve the
wildlife
population around the
world
. One can engage in projects to raise awareness of
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destruction or one can actively take part in activities to protect it. Individuals should find the area in which he or
she
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would like to involve him or
herself
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, as all should be obliged to preserve
the
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wildlife
around the
world
.
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