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The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Using smartphone have a negative
impact
 on human intelligence . It makes us dependent on technology for small tasks. In the long ,run it will surely have an
impact
 on human brains and cognitive abilities. In the impending ,essay I will discuss the negative
impact
 of using
smartphones
 on the human mind. Most individuals nowadays
use
smartphones
 for communication purposes. these phones carry internet connectivity and we can
use
 multiple apps for video streaming , booking cabs, ordering groceries etc. All these activities have a negative
impact
 on humans .
Although
, It has made life easier for us. It has made it dependent on
smartphones
 app. In India,To cite an example ,Most of the population is using
smartphones
 and its app in daily life.
Consequently
 , the
impact
 of its
use
 has a devasting brunt on the human brain.
for example
 whenever anybody goes out from his home to any place . they
use
 google maps to follow the address. so that they can reach the correct address. To illustrate, In countries like Uk , people have reduced their
use
 of
smartphones
 and started using their brain or cognitive abilities in their daily life. Unless we don't follow the strict guidelines for the purpose of
smartphones
 we are not able to decrease our dependency on
smartphones
.
Smartphones
 were not as helpful as they claim to be . In pandemic times telemedicine apps are not able to address every patient concern. To recapitulate , I am of opinion that
smartphones
 are responsible for decreasing human collective intelligence .
Smartphones
 should be used for emergencies. heavily relying on them will prove disastrous for humans and their cognitive abilities.
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