The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The three pie charts illustrate information about the proportion of nutrients in the different types of meals.
Overall
, the number of sodium and saturated fat is the biggest segment in
dinner
food
,
whereas
added sugar can be seen the most in
snacks
.
In addition
, these nutrients account for the smallest part of a breakfast meal. Looking at the details, sodium in
dinner
and lunch
food
account for approximately two quarters (43%) and nearly a quarter (29%) respectively.
Besides
,
snacks
and breakfast
food
consist of an equal proportion of sodium, with a modest 14%. As for saturated fat, typical
dinner
and lunch have 37% and 26% of
such
nutrients in turn, whilst
snacks
and breakfast
food
amount to an average of 18,5% of
this
component. Meanwhile, added sugar is the more widespread nutrient in
snacks
with 42%.
In contrast
,
dinner
only has 23% of
this
nutrient, and the
last
meals make up the
least
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segment of
this
additive, on average 5% less than
dinner
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, food, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • balanced diet
  • overconsumption
  • health risks
  • cultural dietary patterns
  • processed foods
  • portion control
  • government regulations
  • nutrition education
  • informed choices
  • saturated fats
  • trans fats
  • carbohydrates
  • sodium intake
  • public health
  • nutrition labels
  • dietary guidelines
  • caloric content
  • food groups
  • obesity
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • diabetes
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