Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views

In

this

era of globalisation, some individuals believe that

due to

wide

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range of

technology

available today, the gap between

upper

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the upper

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classes and lower classes increase significantly

while

others reject

this

notion. In my opinion,

technology

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technological

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developments

does

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not

effect

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affect

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the gap

among

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society, because

its

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it's

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accessible

by

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everybody.

This

essay will

further

elaborate on both views and

thus

lead to a logical conclusion.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why one could think

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increasing gap between rich and poor. One of the common

reason

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is automation. Automation indeed

play

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an important role in dealing with day to day of

human's

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issues.

However

, automation reduces the need for manual

labor

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in which people are no longer

depending

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on each other.

For instance

, the implementation of artificial intelligence on cars creates unemployment and

degrading

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the

numbers

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of cars produced in the factory.

Thus

, there are no job opportunities for poor people.

On the other hand

, some people believe that

this

wasn't the case.

Due to

advances in

technology

, numerous research on new

substance

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substances

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can be done to support

the

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society as a whole.

For example

, an

increasing

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in

technology

lead

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leads

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to a better quality of medicine produced which in return help society who dealing with

illness

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such

as fever, cough and

athsma

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asthma

.

Moreover

, another impact of

technology

is it improves food production

where

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every party can benefit from it. In the nutshell, I strongly believe that

technology

could possibly narrow the differences

social

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between social

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classes by increasing the quality of medicine and

also

enhances

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food

indsutries

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industries

.