The maps below show the organisation of a bookstore in 2000 and now

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The given maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in a bookstore from 2000 to the present moment.

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, there have been the main differences related to the relocation and addition of different new sections with the introduction of the food area. Looking at the details, upon entering a showcase with travel

books

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still can be seen straight ahead

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a section with new

books

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and a service desk remained at the same place on the right side after entering. Meanwhile, a right-side area with fiction

books

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has been reduced to add art, hobbies and cookery poetry, all of which have been moved from the centre of the bookstore. Another noticeable change is that a left-side non-fiction zone has been replaced with a new café with the introduction of tables in the centre of the bookstore to accommodate customers.

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, an area with non-fiction

books

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has been relocated to the far right corner, where were situated a fiction zone.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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