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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this, and how could it be tackled?

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In
this
 concurrent era, many individuals are getting the issue of inclination in their weight. Even both youngsters and adults go through
this
. In
this
, section underneath,
this
 essay will propagate the causes and solutions of it. To commence with reasons for obesity in today's generation. One of the most preponderant is eating habits. Nowadays, people are busy
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 their daily routine of
work
 and education. They do not have enough time to make homemade meals for themselves. So, they like to eat processed or oily food
that is
 easily available.
For instance
, many migrant students in Canada and Australia like to eat processed food from shops, as it
simply
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 available and
pupil
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pupils
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also
 do not have time to cook. These kinds of
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meal
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 have tonnes of calories and put a huge impact on the body by increasing weight.
In addition
, another factor is physical
work
. These days, folks
also
 avoid exercise because of
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hectic schedules or other reasons.
Due to
 that they
also
 become couch potatoes, which turned to obesity day by day.
However
, there are innumerable resolutions to it. The prominent one is guidance. It is important that parents should guide the masses about the consequences of obesity. It leads to dangerous diseases. They should take significant steps to provide healthy food to youngsters. Despite
this
,
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the school
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school
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schools
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 should
oragnise
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organise
organize
 some games for their student's physical
work
.
Moreover
, companies and
organization
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organizations
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 can
also
 provide free gyms for their employees.
Thus
, they can join for their workout and motivate them by arranging athletic days for them. It will encourage them to become fit and fiddle.
To conclude
,
although
 eating habits and lack of inspiration for physical
work
 rise the weight in individuals. But,
this
 can tackle through some steps taken by officials and organizations.
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