Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some part of the population finds joy in trying new activities or different
food
.
On the other hand
, other
people
feel comfortable doing
things
they know from before.
This
essay will discuss why
people
have
such
a different points
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of view about doing the same
things
or completely differently.
To begin
with, some
people
think they will gain more experience because they are trying unusual
things
. The main reason for that
,
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is visiting new places or trying new
food
increases your knowledge about different cultures or history.
For example
, if you are on holiday to new places like Italy and you are visiting Rome maybe you will discover new
things
about Coliseum you did not know before. In
this
,case you can learn something new and as well find joy
while
you are learning. On the other side, some
people
like to have a sense of stability in their life and
this
can be related to only experiencing
things
they know they like.
Therefore
,
people
who rely on stability tend to not try new
things
because they like more familiar activities or
food
.
For example
, Oxford university analysts different kinds of personalities and shows
people
who tend to be more stable are less open to experiencing new activities or
food
. For
this
people
's personality influences the way they want to experience life with new
things
or
thing
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things
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they know from before. In conclusion, some
people
like to try
a new experiences
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in their life.
However
, other
people
like more familiar
things
. In my opinion, I think I like more trying new
things
because of the experience and new knowledge.
On the other hand
, we see why some
people
are not so open to experiencing new
things
mainly because of their personality which chooses to have more stability.
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