The maps shows the town of Lynnfield

The maps shows the town of Lynnfield
These two maps highlight data about the most important differences which took place in the
city
of Lynnfield, over the period between 1936 and 2007.
Overall
, what stands out from the maps is that Lynnfield became much more modern and developed, with more entertainment facilities and accommodation.
However
, there were fewer trees and green areas. In detail, if we look at the North-East of the town, there used to be a river but it had been replaced into a residential area.
As a result
, the vast majority of people could afford to live in a big
city
. In terms of the North-West, a large number of trees had been cut down and fewer of them stayed in their place. As regards the
city
centre, one significant improvement had been the opening of a shopping centre in 2007.
Moreover
, butchers and sweet and flower shops were redeveloped into a supermarket and a travel
agent
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over a 71-year period. Regarding the South of the
city
, a cycle path had been turned into a road in the South-West of the urban area.
Finally
, in 1936, there used to be government offices and farmland, but by 2007, they had been demolished and made into a museum and a golf course in the South-East of the
city
.
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