The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
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The graph provides information about the number of incidents in three types of criminal
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in Newport city from 2003 to 2012.
It is clear that
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burglary was the highest rate of
incident
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the incident
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in the first part
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that was recorded but in the rest
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the highest incident was car theft. The Burglary figure slightly increased in beginning and reached a peak at over 3500 cases in 2004,
then
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a dramatic decline until 2008. After
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we can see a
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of fluctuation for the rest years.
On the other hand
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, the total numbers of car theft incidents remain stable for three years in the beginning but in 2006 and 2008 the cases decreased.
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, car thievery incidents came back increased and became the highest crime rate.
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, the robbery experience has the most stable trend over the
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of time. The total accident
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the first
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was over 500, they continued almost stable until the end.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recorded
  • trends
  • criminal activity
  • categories
  • theft
  • assault
  • vandalism
  • graph
  • x-axis
  • y-axis
  • number of crimes
  • visual representation
  • changes
  • crime rates
  • fluctuating pattern
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