The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The graph provides information about the number of incidents in three types of criminal
action
in Newport city from 2003 to 2012.
Replace the word
activity
It is clear that
burglary was the highest rate of incident
in the first part Add an article
the incident
an incident
period
that was recorded but in the rest part
the highest incident was car theft.
The Burglary figure slightly increased in beginning and reached a peak at over 3500 cases in 2004, Add a comma
,part
then
a dramatic decline until 2008. After that
we can see a Add a comma
,that
period
of fluctuation for the rest years. On the other hand
, the total numbers of car theft incidents remain stable for three years in the beginning but in 2006 and 2008 the cases decreased. In addition
, car thievery incidents came back increased and became the highest crime rate.
Moreover
, the robbery experience has the most stable trend over the period
of time. The total accident at
the first Change preposition
in
period
was over 500, they continued almost stable until the end.Submitted by febriantyhasanah on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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