The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie charts illustrate the average proportions in three categories of typical
meals
including
sodium
, saturated fat and added
sugar
which
occur
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in the United States.
Overall
, it can be seen that the largest percentage of typical
meals
depict in terms of dinner time and
also
has the highest percentage in
sodium
,
while
the figures show that breakfast
meals
have a marginal
rate
in each segment of nutrients. In terms of dinner
meals
, the biggest proportion is
sodium
which is 43%,
then
saturated fat is 37% and added
sugar
is 23%.
In contrast
, the highest snack time is added
sugar
which is 42%, and the
rate
near
sodium
is only 1%.
According to
breakfast
meals
, the
rate
is almost slight equally which is
sodium
14% and saturated fat 16%, the data is the same
rate
, with the
rate
of added
sugar
(16%).
Moreover
, the lunch meal has the highest
sodium
rates (29%) than saturated fat (26%) which differ by just 3% and added
sugar
(19%) is the smallest
rate
in lunch
meals
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, sodium, sugar, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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