the tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the tables below  give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050.   summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables provide information about the total number of citizens in the world and the distribution of those people in six continents between 1950 and 2000
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2050.
It is clear that
the estimation of people who will live on the earth in 2050 increase by around seven billion from 1950.
Then
we can see that a great number population of people stayed in Asia either in 1950
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2000
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the projection for 2050. In the first table, the data show that the world's population increased dramatically until 2000,
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based on the calculation it will grow three times from 2000 to 2050.
On the other hand
, the allocation of the population in three regions include Asia, Latin America, and North America have fluctuated percentages, but in
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there will be a dramatic increase between 1950 and the prediction of 2050, contrary to Europe the proportion of crowd will sharply decrease over the period of the time.
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