Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.   The diagrams show the structure of solar panel and its use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams depict information about the structural features of a solar
panel
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and its purpose; to produce heated water.
Overall
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, making a solar
panel
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is a straightforward process by creating an equal proportion box with a clear top and protruding holes in opposite directions.
Whereas
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, to produce hot water it does require two additional essential components the water pipe and the sun’s heat energy. The first picture shows a sun-generated
panel
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box
that is
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proportionally made, with an inlet and outlet on opposite sides and a transparent lid
that is
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well-fitted to the top which absorbs heat from the sun.
Then
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, the second picture illustrates the solar
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panel
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panel's
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transparent lid directly hit by the
sun
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sun's
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rays, producing hot air right after it was placed under the sun. Wherein the cool and warm air passes through the sides. Meanwhile, the third picture is where when the tube is added and attached to the opposite holes, followed by
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words panel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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