In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

It is clear to be observed that there has been a rapid increase in the viewership of
sports
events has prompted broadcasters to provide
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coverage on television
round
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around
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the clock. Some believe that
this
discourages youth from taking part in
sports
activies
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activities
themselves.
This
essay will discuss the
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notion in detail and illustrate why it
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completely untrue. People who are critical of continuous coverage of
sports
events
claim
that watching athletes get injured frequently
while
participating in
sports
activities
often scares
the
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young spectators about injuries if they physically participate in
sports
.
Furthermore
, it is stated that
children
and teenagers are often occupied with their educational challenges and long school hours.
This
ensure
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that youngsters have minimal leisure time. Non-stop broadcasting of
sports
acitivities
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activities
will keep the youth pupils glued to the television eating all their leisure.
Although
people
claim
that it may scare
children
of injuries and eat most of their time,
but
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it is imperative to get a practical idea of life. Most other TV programs right from news channels to cartoons do have violent scenes telecasted either way.
Also
,
broadcast
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the broadcast
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of
sports
activities
actually
give
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youth exposure to
sports
activities
which not only cultivates an interest but
also
inspire them to participate in
sports
activities
. The youngsters often intend to experiment
their
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hand
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by participating in the
play grounds
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playgrounds
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. Through
this
,
children
can
also
explore the idea of becoming an athlete in future. A good illustration of
this
is the fact that most athletes confess watching their favourite sportsperson played a major role in pursuing a career as an
athelete
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athlete
. In conclusion,
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stand point
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of those who
claim
that too much coverage of
sports
activities
discourages
children
from participating themselves as they may get scared of injuries and may potentially lose their leisure. I completely disagree with
this
claim
as it
instead
inspires
children
to play
sports
and
also
open door to realise their goal of becoming an
athelete
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athlete
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Continuous coverage
  • Discourage
  • Participation
  • Televised sports
  • Professional athletes
  • Intimidate
  • Motivate
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Spectator
  • Inspire
  • Educate
  • Visibility
  • Idols
  • Emulate
  • Personal triumph
  • Accessible
  • Facilities
  • Programs
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