plastic bags , plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the envirnment . what damage does plastic do to the environment ? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem ?

Environment
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The environment
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is a case that all of the
people
on the planet should take care of it .
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Environment
Enviroment
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The enviroment
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is the main reason for a better life for
animals
and human
being
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beings
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.
enviroment
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environment
is the
sheild
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shield
that
protect
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protects
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the earth from
ultra violet
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ultraviolet
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radiation .
unfortantely
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Unfortunately
people
are the main reasons for the
damages
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damage
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that happen to the
environment
and they have to take steps and decisions to care more about it .
environment
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the environment
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is one of the main reasons for the good health of
people
and the non
extint
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extinct
of
animals
, there are many factors that
causes
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cause
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damages
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damage
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of
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to
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the
enviroment
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environment
which is the
consuming
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consumption
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of
the
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apply
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plastic
, it is
find
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fine
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in most
of
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people
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people's
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houses , factories , roads , schools and
alot
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a lot
of places , it is one of the main uses on the daily routine of human life , it is used in many things like using in
plastic
bags , in some of the
manufactring
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manufacturing
machines . after
people
finish using
of
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plastic
bottles they throw
it
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them
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in
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on
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roads and most
of
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factories
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the factories
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throw their
plastics
packaging and
rabbish
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rubbish
in
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into
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river or seas which cause the death
to
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the aquatic
animals
and
some times
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sometimes
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it leads to their
extint
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extent
extinct
, even if they burn
it
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apply
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this
cause
an
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enomorous
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enormous
damage
in
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the atmosphere of the earth .
this
leads to
avery
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a very
series
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serious
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case
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cases
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that
threat
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threaten
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our planet so some
government
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governments
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made
awarness
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awareness
campagin
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campaign
for the
plastic
damages
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damage
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and to stop
use
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using
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it and to have
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like
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a change
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change
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changing
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from
plastic
bags and
start
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starting
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to use bags that are
freindlly
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friendly
to
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
and stop through it on
river
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the river
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and
instead
of it recycle it , individuals should
replaces
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the
plastic
that they had in their houses to a
freindly
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friendly
environment
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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and
also
to make
campagins
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campaigns
to divine in the ocean to clean it from the
plastics
to stop the death of the
animals
.
plastics
is
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are
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a huge threat
for
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our
environment
that should be stopped before many life of
animals
leads it to death because of using
plastics
so much , the
awarness
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awareness
is much needed for our world to
knows
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know
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that it damage and we can replace it in so many different ways that will help to protect our
environment
and
atmoshpere
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atmosphere
.
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