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Nowadays, we are producing more and more waste? What are causes of this? What can be done to help reduce the amount of waste we produce?

#waste #amount
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amount
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 of garbage
have
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 been
creating
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by
humen
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human
 beings . There are manifold factors which affected
this
 scenario,
whereas
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can alleviate
this
 issue.
This
 essay will discuss some of them. Primarily, high consumerism in
modern
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 world
are
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 one of the main reason ,
hence
 a large
amount
 of
waste
 have been
throwing
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 out . To explain,
people
 are doing
an
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elaborate shopping on products like food , dress and consumables ,
as
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 a
result
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,result
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 more
waste
 are
producing
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produced
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 which is very difficult to manage.
Apart from
this
 ,
increased
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number of
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population is another reason for pouring out
massive
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a massive
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amount
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amounts
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 of
waste
. The cities and towns are creating countless
amount
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 of garbage , where the high density of
people
 live and it is very difficult to control and manage.
Overall
 the increased buying habit and population
hike
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 are the main cause of high
waste
 production.
However
 , there are several measures
can
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 be taken to reduce the problem,
such
 as by educating and giving awareness to
people
 about the environmental and health issues which
creating
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 by
the
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waste
.
In addition
 to that , by
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supply
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 of
single use
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 items and
encourage
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encouraging
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people
 to buy reusable products and imposing
extra
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an extra
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 tax on plastics can help to reveal
this
 issue.
Furthermore
,
a
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good
waste
 management in
town
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towns
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 and cities can be implemented and the cost can be charged
from
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 residents
,
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so that the
waste
 can be collected periodically and which can be recycled, use to make fertilisers and can be used for land fillings. On the whole , by giving alerting
people
 and
a
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proper
waste
 management will be the solution
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this
 stigma.
To sum up
, the
over consuming
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 and increased
number of
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population
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the population
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causing
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 more
wast
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waste
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 production,
while
 awareness and outstanding
waste
 management can reduce the
waste
.
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