Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technological advancement in recent times has helped people in fulfilling their work with ease. People believe that these electronic
devices
have actually made their lives even more difficult
while
others contest
this
claim.
However
, I strongly agree that these modernly mechanized
devices
have caused a negative impact on human civilization.
This
essay will discuss the reasons and provide a justification in detail.
Although
it is often said that electronic
devices
like washing
machines
and computers have assisted us in saving time and effort,
but
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at what expense? People using these
machines
tend to rely on them to automate their work which reduces their physical activity on a regular basis. As we all know that lack of physical activity not only jeopardises our fitness but
also
leads to dangerous diseases like obesity. A good illustration of
this
is the fact that there are more obese patients in
this
generation than ever observed in the past. I have
also
observed personally that most obese patients are the ones using gadgets and electronic
machines
on a regular basis. Either by charging the battery or connecting a wire to the
power
socket, all electronic
machines
and
devices
require
power
to function.
This
not only leads to incessantly high electric bills on a regular basis but
also
leads to a shortage of
power
supply because of which the
power
supplying
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companies cannot suffice it through renewable energy.
Therefore
, they are left with no other option than to use non-renewable sources like the burning of fossil fuels which plays a significant role in global warming and climate change.
To conclude
, labour-saving electronic
devices
have caused a negative impact.
Although
it automated a lot of work, at the same time, it has minimized our physical activity and increased
power
consumption which plays an indirect role in global warming.
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