The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

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The illustrations depict

changed

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museum

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buildings and grounds between 1957 and 2007.

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, the building has become developed whilst the number of trees has been reduced significantly. In 1957, the grounds had a lot of trees compared to 2007. Most of the trees at the front of the

museum

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, rear and

the

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left of the

museum

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have been cut down. Where there was a driveway, we can find a car park

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. The building in itself has undergone various changes.

To begin

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with, the entrance was moved from the middle to the left of the building. Visitors should now enter from the

museum

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shop to enter the building. The

museum

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shop leads way to the

receptio

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reception

. A cafe has been built next to the reception replacing the

museum

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storeroom. The National

history

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History

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exhibition has been replaced by the local history room. The

museum

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building has been enlarged to add a special exhibition room and an education centre.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

159 words

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The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

It is sad that life is becoming increasingly stressful for most people. What is the reason of this phenomenon and how could this problem be solved?

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagee?

45.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.