The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.

The diagram below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007.
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The illustrations depict
changed
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to
a
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museum
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buildings and grounds between 1957 and 2007.
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, the building has become developed whilst the number of trees has been reduced significantly. In 1957, the grounds had a lot of trees compared to 2007. Most of the trees at the front of the
museum
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, rear and
the
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left of the
museum
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have been cut down. Where there was a driveway, we can find a car park
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. The building in itself has undergone various changes.
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with, the entrance was moved from the middle to the left of the building. Visitors should now enter from the
museum
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shop to enter the building. The
museum
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shop leads way to the
receptio
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reception
. A cafe has been built next to the reception replacing the
museum
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storeroom. The National
history
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exhibition has been replaced by the local history room. The
museum
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building has been enlarged to add a special exhibition room and an education centre.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.
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