The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate how the town of the Norbiton
area
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will be developed
according to
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the plan.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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more roads will be constructed for easy access.
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, factories will be replaced by housing in order to draw new residents. First of all, a new bridge will be available, which future dwellers can directly go to the town's north part, where farmland is located across the river.
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, roads will be made to the northwest and the southern part of the
area
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. There will be another circled road on the southern road, which connects with the big circled road in the middle.
Next,
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factories currently located in the
area
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will be replaced by a number of newly built houses.
This
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allows families to live in the new
area
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,
therefore
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new facilities for residents will be
also
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constructed in the centre of the town including shops, medical centre, school and playground.
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