It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
era of globalisation, some people argue it is natural
process for certain Add an article
a natural
the natural
animals
species Change the noun form
animal
such
as dodo or dinosour
to become extinct and there is no reason why Correct your spelling
dinosaur
dinosaurs
community
should try to prevent Add an article
the community
this
from occur
. From my personal point of view, I strongly agree with the statement aforementioned above. Change the form of the verb
occurring
This
essay will further
elaborate my views and thus
lead to a logical conclusion.
Supporting my agreement to
the given statement, I firmly believe Change preposition
with
this phenomena
is natural. As To cite an example, in New Zealand, the bird species called Kereru Change the determiner
this phenomenon
these phenomena
who
able to swallow seeds of native Correct pronoun usage
apply
threes
and disperse them had extinct. The extinction of Correct your spelling
trees
this
may result in loss
of many native trees Correct article usage
the loss
due to
a large scale
fire and extreme changes in climate. Add a hyphen
large-scale
Consequently
, this
small population of birds could be vulnerable to extinction.
Explaining some other
point in favour Correct quantifier usage
another
with
the statement is Change preposition
of
the
human activities give impact Correct your spelling
that
to
Change preposition
apply
this
situation. Since human is one of the most brilliant living creatures on earth, they contribute to massive destruction. For instance
, when the human population increase
year by year, they began to Replace the word
increased
built
their own territory by constructing Change the verb
build
Add an article
a building
the building
building
, exploitation of natural resources and more which creates pollution and loss of habitats. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
As a result
, it increase
the number of endangered flora and fauna.
To summarise, it is undeniable that human life has been maintained by a natural world. It is predicted that the extinction will come back to be a natural event and not be in relation to human activities.Change the verb form
increases
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