It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

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era of globalisation, some people argue it is

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process for certain

animals

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species

such

as dodo or

dinosour

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dinosaur

dinosaurs

to become extinct and there is no reason why

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should try to prevent

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from

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. From my personal point of view, I strongly agree with the statement aforementioned above.

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the given statement, I firmly believe

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is natural. As To cite an example, in New Zealand, the bird species called Kereru

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able to swallow seeds of native

threes

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and disperse them had extinct. The extinction of

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may result in

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of many native trees

due to

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large scale

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fire and extreme changes in climate.

Consequently

,

this

small population of birds could be vulnerable to extinction. Explaining some

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the statement is

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human activities give impact

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this

situation. Since human is one of the most brilliant living creatures on earth, they contribute to massive destruction.

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, when the human population

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year by year, they began to

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their own territory by constructing

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a building

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building

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, exploitation of natural resources and more which creates pollution and loss of habitats.

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, it

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the number of endangered flora and fauna. To summarise, it is undeniable that human life has been maintained by a natural world. It is predicted that the extinction will come back to be a natural event and not be in relation to human activities.