A friend has written a letter to you informing you about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/city advise him about the place he could stay at suggest to him/her what to pack and bring while coming to travel to your country/city
Dear Harvey,
I hope you and your family are all well. I received your letter through which I came to know about your visit. I am just writing to let you
inform
about some mesmerising places in India and worthwhile visiting.
Verb problem
know
Firstly
, you will come to my country first time with your family. It is such
great news. I will also
get a chance to meet you. Your stay for a week from 17 September to 23rd September. I would like to recommend you to visit Sukhna Lake and the rose garden which are
maintained over the years and attract tourists every year, without any doubt you like the environment and enjoy it. It is situated in the heart of Chandigarh city.
Moving on, I will offer you an open heart to stay at my farmhouse which is situated Wrong verb form
have been
nearby
Chandigarh. You will surely enjoy the atmosphere and I will provide you with everything as per your need. Correct your spelling
near
Moreover
, there are also
well-maintained hotels nearby that city like The Blue Mountain and Grey Hut. These are five-star hotels but very expensive.
Finally
, I will personally suggest you bring some medicines for fever and allergy because the drastic change in weather maybe
affect you. At that time Correct your spelling
may
temperature
would be around 23° to 25°.,Correct article usage
the temperature
Also
bring some summer clothes and two sets of winter if you will make a plan to visit a hilly area like Manali.
I hope my suggestion would
help you to decide what is best for you. I am waiting to welcome you and with family.
Best wishes,
JohnWrong verb form
will
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider organizing paragraphs around a single main idea even more clearly to improve coherence.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try improving logical structure by providing a brief conclusion or summary of the advice given.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are friendly and appropriate, setting a warm tone for the letter.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task prompt clearly, providing suitable advice for the friend's visit.
Task Achievement
The writing tone is friendly and inviting, matching the context of a letter to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite