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Plan A below shows a health care centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

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The drawings illustrate the alternatives and updates of a clinic centre from 2005 to nowadays.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the clinic has several changes from the number of rooms to the facilities. Looking at the map in more detail, the garden has reduced in acreage to make way for the car parking, which was increased from 12 parking slots to 30 parking slots. The main access
also
 has been moved to the west
side
 corner of the building. The building has constructed another room for the building on the northwest
side
 of it, which is a minor operations room. Since the entrance has changed, the entry area inside of the building has been constructed into two rooms including CR1 and CR2 respectively from the new doorway. The CR3 has been flattened for the gate hall and the construction
also
 makes way for the reception desk on the left-hand
side
 and a children’s play area on the right-hand
side
 when you enter the building. CR1 and CR2 have reduced in size and changed into CR3 and CR4. The office
also
 cut off a little bit in acreage and there was an increase in the number of seats for the clients from 11 to 13 seats, which were placed around the hall and close to the walls.
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