The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The assigned bar graph expounds
the
information about how the results of a survey conducted over three year period to discover what people who live in Correct article usage
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the
London think of the city. The data is calibrated in Correct article usage
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the
percentage.
It seems that those citizens Correct article usage
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were
lived in Unnecessary verb
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the
London, which noticed that Correct article usage
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range
of shopping had the highest proportion in Correct article usage
the range
each
three years, about Change the determiner
every
of
41% to 45%. In the contrast, the lowest proportion was recorded in Change preposition
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transportation
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area
around Fix the agreement mistake
areas
of
20% to 25% in Change preposition
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first
, second and third years. Along Correct article usage
the first
this
, the job opportunities and the mixture of people Change preposition
with this
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in that
that
areas Correct pronoun usage
those
were
seemed equal percentile in between 35% and 37%.
Probing Unnecessary verb
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further
, the ratio of museum
and art gallery Fix the agreement mistake
museums
were
stood at 21% in the beginning year but the fraction was slightly rise Unnecessary verb
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of
3% in 2 and 3 years and ends its peaked value of 27%. Afterwards, Change preposition
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night life
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nightlife
those
had Correct pronoun usage
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same
ratio as compared to Change the article
the same
transportation
system into 20% to 25%.
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the transportation
Overall
, it is clear from the above graph that the results of a survey showed that shopping, job opportunities and mixed
of people that things, which are loved by every person Change the form of the verb
mix
of
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in
the
London.Correct article usage
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